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PastaFearFactory, June 30th, 2017, 10:45 am ( Reply )

@NekoSeiboy: we'll see if you're right soon

PastaFearFactory, June 30th, 2017, 11:58 am ( Reply )

@NekoSeiboy: yep! She's a redesign on an old OC I had! https://pastafearfactory.tumblr.com/ < full pic in HD is on my tumblr if you're interested :D

PastaFearFactory, June 30th, 2017, 12:20 pm ( Reply )

@NekoSeiboy: thanks!

PastaFearFactory, June 30th, 2017, 12:45 pm ( Reply )

@NekoSeiboy: sure, but maybe in a private message? Just in case someone wants to steal it or something XDDDD

OnyxKita, July 2nd, 2017, 3:16 am ( Reply )

The story so far is interesting, the art does need some work-but it's a start! you've caught my attention and I can't wait to see what will happen next!

PastaFearFactory, July 2nd, 2017, 6:58 am ( Reply )

@OnyxKita: that's great to hear! I totally aree, my art isn't the best, so any specific things I should focus on?

OnyxKita, July 2nd, 2017, 11:01 am ( Reply )

@PastaFearFactory: I would say anatomy as a first thing. To me What helps when studying different styles is seeing how they are done step by step. (So I sometimes looked up tutorials on deviant art or YouTube. (Sometimes even looking up regular human muscle structure that can be a lot of help in anything(also looking at reference images helps when you need a little help with what something really looks like.))) But again you are doing good and practice makes perfect!

PastaFearFactory, July 2nd, 2017, 11:10 am ( Reply )

@OnyxKita: I actually do quite a lot of anatomy studies and stuff in my sketchbook so I'd say my proportions and stuff in realistic anatomy are pretty decent (lmao tooting my own horn here) but I think it might not translate to this style all that well all the time (like on this page leon's arms came out WAY too thin). But thank you for the advice

OnyxKita, July 2nd, 2017, 11:17 am ( Reply )

@PastaFearFactory: that's good, then you are the right track! And again practice makes perfect-but still good story! Look forward to see new pages!

PastaFearFactory, July 2nd, 2017, 11:18 am ( Reply )

@OnyxKita: thank you! by the way, your critique is really nice!

OnyxKita, July 2nd, 2017, 11:30 am ( Reply )

@PastaFearFactory: of course, there is never a need to be mean to someone. (My name is Jess by the way, nice to meet you.)

PastaFearFactory, July 2nd, 2017, 11:36 am ( Reply )

@OnyxKita: That's true. (I'm Nora :) )

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